So I was torn between Clariel and the first book from my Fairyloot box, and decided something easy going and interesting would be good. I remember the box described this as a cross between 47 Ronin and Milan so I thought this would be a good read.
Now I have seen 47 Ronin, but I can’t remember much about it, so I don’t know whether the similarities are right, but the only thing I could see in common with Mulan was that this follows a girl pretending to be a boy amongst a group of fighters.
I did rate this as 4 stars as there as less gripping books I’ve rated the same. But the more I think about this book, the more I’m inclined to lower it to 3 stars. I found it gripping enough to keep me reading, but the plot was a fairly predictable and the writing a bit clunky.
So (spoiler alert) the story follows Mariko, who is on her way to the emperors castle to marry his (illegitimate) son, when her convoy is attacked by who she presumes is the Black Clan. Aptly named because, guess what…., they dress all in black, so she cannot be sure who it was exactly. Luckily, Mariko gathers enough courage to save herself from the burning carriage, makes her way through the forest and after a run in with a horrible old man, discovers their regular watering hole and lays in wait for the Black Clan to appear. They somehow decide to take her on board and so she begins her life with the clan, with the intention of discovering why they had been commissioned to kill her.
Now right at the beginning of the book, we see a young boy who watches his father kill himself, and on his way through the crowd he makes eye contact with a young girl. So when Mariko first meets the leader of the Black Clan, my first thought was ‘shes going to fall in love with him and decide she wants to be with him’. So, guess what… She did fall in love, just not with who I thought, but that’s mainly because (now here’s the plot twist) the leader isn’t actually who he says he is, he’s the best friend of who he claims to be. But that doesn’t really matter, as she does actually fall in love with the little boy from the beginning of the book. I found it all too predictable and a little bit lacklustre as you could see it coming from a mile off. Who would have thought that you would fall in love with the one person you hate more than anyone else??
Aside from the predictable plot, I felt the style of writing was a bit clunky and didn’t feel quite as natural. There’s a lot of short, quick sentences, used to add tension, which I admit it did, but I felt it didn’t need to always be there. I also felt it was a bit strange to make the Japanese words stand out from the rest of the text, so you felt like you had to process them separately.
The last annoyance of this read, was that it is the first of a series, and although I knew this when I started, I hoped more would be resolved by the end. In fact, I don’t think anything was resolved by the end, which made it all the more frustrating.
Nevertheless, this has thankfully taken a short enough time to read to knock one off my challenge, leaving me only 2 books behind. The next on I have chosen to read is Daughter of the Burning City. Im hoping this will be much better than Flame in the Mist, but we’ll see.